Translation Check by Chrouya Script: Dog Days' 09 [timed - xMyth][TS-mdai] Workraw: Dog Days' - 09 480 AAC 40 {\fad(1250,0)\bord2\be1\fs38\fnFranklin Gothic Medium\c&HECFDEF&\4c&HE043D8&\3c&HEA43E7&\pos(888,708)} 「One-On-One In The Skies and On Land!˩ {\fad(1250,0)\bord2\be1\fs38\fnFranklin Gothic Medium\c&HECFDEF&\4c&HE043D8&\3c&HEA43E7&\pos(888,708)} 「Dueling In The Skies And On Land!˩ {changing one-on-one to dueling here} {I suggest capitalising the A in and: when everything else has capitals, it looks prettier like this} {and it's an (un)written rule in making titles in English} 43 today is the day that the three countries' joint festival begins. today marks the beginning of the three countries' joint festival. {festival is literally the opening's day/opening/beginning} 46 Ah, there's nothing like a bath first thing in the morning! Ah, nothing like a shower first thing in the morning! {it's a shower} 59 That sounds pretty interesting.{bad neko chan.} I'd love to find out. {this sounds better in context} 62 Well, Eclair is a growing girl, so she has her moments. {mood swings?} {Well, Eclair is a girl at that age already, so she has her moods} {leave as is. Indeed in that sense.} 65 I'm sorry, Hime-sama. It seems Cou-sama has taken a big liking to Cinque.{as in attached to him natsuite or big liking~} I'm sorry, Princess. It seems Cou-sama has taken a big liking to Cinque. {consistency.} 69 I guess we should probably get going. We should probably get on our way home. {the nuance is also on going back --> to Pastillage} 72 You know, Millhi-nee and Cinque, once the war starts, we'll be each other's enemies. See you soon, Millhi-nee and Cinque! Once the war starts, we'll be each other's enemies! {I'd suggest a line split here. ~de ha, is used as farewell gesture} 76 That's right!{this line is said by cou and omg her accent can kill me tlc onegai~} Alligator! {I'd put icing on the cake here with a nice song title quote} 81 {chrouya san there is a sign here with kanji what i get is Biscotti i leave the rest to you.} {isn't it saying Biscotti Front Lines now? No problem with it now.} 83 Both of you, go and rest until the meeting begins.{kaigi is meeting but oh well~} Both of you, go and rest until the opening. {but she's saying 開幕(kaimaku) == opening} 88 They going to use everything they've got. {just noting that she's the current captain, in likewise dire context} 89 The Biscotti knight squad is getting stronger and stronger. It's really great. The Biscotti Knight Squad is getting stronger and stronger. It's really great. 91 Anyway, Eclair-chan, it looks like you've been worrying about something. Despite that, Éclair-chan, it looks like you've been worrying about something. {nanoni (even though). Also, keep consistent with the accent aigu (é) if you want to use it. } 95 Eclair, you love the Hero! {ricotta too much talking~!! yuusha sama and hime sama forever~!!} Éclair, you love the Hero! {ricotta too much talking~!! yuusha sama and hime sama forever~!!} {é} 111 The reason I'm mad is you, Eclair. You're never honest and you never open up, you just worry. The reason I'm mad is you, Éclair. Never being honest and always worrying all by yourself. {idem, and fixed some wording} 112 That's why being honest and...{she keeps saying half sentences eclair wa baka~!!} I tell you, that's not the problem... 113 Well, for now it doesn't matter. Well, never mind all of this. {this is better wording for the situation} 117 Just leave me alone. No matter what you do, I'll still do my best in battle. Just leave me alone. Even without your concerns, I'll still do my best in battle. {alt. Giving way to the context} 120 Don't act like this now, Éclair. {note that the word uncool is also being said in this line, and she repeats the line (in confirmative sense) afterwards.} 123 If you feel ashamed of that, go ahead.{well not really ashamed but rather shamed/pathetic about eclair's way of acting} If you think I'm being pathetic, go ahead. {think ashamed of me?} {lit. like to think} {my take on this line} 132 Eclair you... Eclair... Éclair you... Éclair... 140 Well, that's more likely than you think. Well, it's the usual thing. {alt. just showing that these two always have such arguments, apparently. Nothing special is implied.} 157 And it goes without saying that I shall not use Grand Vert.{what was leo's weapon name again?~~~} Therefore I shall not make use of Grandvert. {Demonic Battleaxe Grandvert} {I found this one weird to read. The context is because she doesn't want Grandvert to be destroyed.} 183 Princess MIllhiore!{people shouting!} Hello! {the crowd is answering with konnichiwa} 184 The three countries' joint festival is finally starting! The three countries' joint event, Union Festa, is finally starting! {she's calling the name} 188 Yes,any time! Yes, any time! 201 In the meantime, Princess-sama is going back to Biscotti's main camp. In the meantime, Princess-sama is currently going back to Biscotti's main camp from her announcement. {there were words lost in translation here} 206 Eclair and her Highness Leo are moving towards Prizet Bridge! Knight Éclair and her Highness Leo are moving towards the Great Brise Bridge! {keeping french terms in them} 208 {Bright}Shining Ice Blade! 216 If i lose, If I lose, 220 Her Highness Leo's cannon seal! {etc...} Her Highness Leo's Emblem Cannon! {etc...} {was this the name of it} 222 and 223 have OK naming, no problem. 244 Knight Eclair is in big trouble! Knight Éclair is in big trouble! 248 I just wanted to cheer you up, as you are always way too serious, Eclair. I just wanted to cheer you up, as you are always way too serious, Éclair. 253 {all okay} 270 Captain Eclair has recovered!{fukatsu is revive but well just freely edit this~} Captain Éclair has recovered!{fukatsu is revive but well just freely edit this~} 273 Shining Power release! Bright Power, release! {I believe the consistent term was bright power} 274 {tl;dr} Shining Ice Blade! Double wield! {there's a roaming accolade/brace somewhere} 285 Captain Éclair has won!{has been decided as the winner more offficialy.}~ Captain Eclair has won the battle! {stretching the line} 286 Her Shining Power has destroyed Her Highness Leo's sword and armor! Her Bright Power has destroyed Her Highness Leo's sword and armor! 295 Castle Vannette is all women, so i surprisingly understand the female heart. Castle Vanette is all women, so I surprisingly understand the female heart. {cleaning~} 301 And with that, the one-on-one battle on the Prizet Bridge goes to Biscotti! And with that, the one-on-one battle on the Great Brise Bridge goes to Biscotti! 304 Eclair! Éclair! 316 It seems Princess-sama and Head of Inventions are going into the sky together. {I recall an instance of Rico being called chief somewhere. Check that.}